Below is a modified text and the original text from page 247 of Richard Sennett’s The Craftsman. I think a person experienced in improvising, dance for example, is similar to an experience doctor diagnosing a patient. The person with experience thinks in larger units of time, makes me think of the movemes from the chapter on Tango in the Oxford Improvisation in Dance tome. I think also a person with experience can also think in smaller units of time, thinking of Nita Little’s Thin Slicing of time. An person with experience can oscillate between large and small units of time, anticipating on several scales.
Modified Text
The experienced improviser, as one would expect, is a more accurate diagnostician.This is due in large part to the fact that he or she tends to be more open to oddity and particularity in movement, whereas the novice is more likely to be a formalist, working by the book, rather rigidly applying general rules to particular cases. Moreover, the experienced improviser thinks in larger units of time, not just backward to cases in the past but, more interestingly, forward, trying to see into the dance’s indeterminate future. The novice, lacking a storehouse of histories, has trouble imagining what might be an individual moment’s fate.
Original Text
The experienced doctor, as one would expect, is a more accurate diagnostician. This is due in large part to the fact that he or she tends to be more open to oddity and particularity in patients, whereas the medical student is more likely to be a formalist, working by the book, rather rigidly applying general rules to particular cases. Moreover, the experienced doctor thinks in larger units of time, not just backward to cases in the past but, more interestingly, forward, trying to see into the patient’s indeterminate future. The novice, lacking a storehouse of clinical histories, has trouble imagining what might be an individual patient’s fate.